You need to get to the point

Structure- beginning, middle, end

Flow- tie together 

Evidence (support) - from book 

Mechanic- spelling,punctuation, capitalization 

1:19 AM Sunday morning, laying in bed not a sound in the house . Wide awake ..... why do we have feelings ? Life is just a funny thing.... make money to buy things .... have phones to contact people around the world... feelings .... that’s another story! Has the brain asked the heart why do you have feelings ? Feelings is one MAJOR problem in this world ... without feelings there wouldn’t be this crazy world that’s standing today. It’s a big part of our lives . This shouldn’t be something people should be hurt by....something is bugging it messes up the rest of your night..... can’t sleep feels stupid .... just annoyed..  constantly  wondering about others opinions.... too many eyes looking .... feels as if people are talking about the  intruder .... all leads to this thing that has caused not only.. pain.... war.... deaths..... but this world to be a closed book....

This gif is explains how I was all year I was lost  throughout the course . I didn’t read the books Dr.preston said to read. I would just ask someone to tell me what the book was about. I didn’t do my  journals  I would just sit there in my own world alone or maybe talking to my friends

My masterpiece is coming along, I’m learning some things I didn’t get from the beginning. Something that fought my attention is that the fact the government doesn’t want to spend money on mental people because they said there’s no point if they will die. Honestly that makes no sense to me because everyone will die but just because they are mental they won’t spend money. That’s going into  stigma . I didn’t know what stigma mean but now I do thanks to Dr.preson. Anyways so I know that I will be set by my due date.

My grandma and I are fighting. We haven’t talked for over a little over a month. She is not talking to me because I haven’t said sorry, why would I say sorry if I’m not sorry for what happens ? I am not mad at her I will talk to her but I will not say sorry. I tell me self everyday “ why wake up to a whole new day and live that day that already last” meaning why wake up on a Tuesday and still live with what happened on a Monday? Like just let it go don’t be mad it takes more time to be mad then to be nice. That’s how I go about with everything in the world. Like no matter the pain the person put you through just let it go the next day because the could not be around that long.

Today is the first day at camp with the 6 graders. My day was pretty chill. It’s weird because 5 years ago I was the 6 grader at science camp. I am at Rancho. Today we went on a night walk and learned that when you have your ears cuffed backwards you can hear far. Also that the green mint lifesaver creat light at night when you chew with your mouth open. We eat backed potatoes with beans and broccoli. My natural name is Sea turtle because I love turtles! Well tomorrow my group will be heading out to morro bay! I’m going to get some rest.

This picture is very powerful.

Many of us all have electronics. We use them on daily basis but, do we ever get things done that need to be done on time? I don't for example I should be doing some type of something in my Ag Chemistry class right now but I'm not. I'm on my phone taking my "precious time" as what my English teacher said out of my day. This world is crazy! When I was in elementary we all wanted til the next day to talk about whatever we needed to talk about or, we will go over and visit our friends. Now you don't see that. You see kids walking around with the phones out.

Notes in class 1/16/18

Ethos - character of the speaker " Does she know what they are talking about. Non varbal / para varbal - how you use your voice
Pathos- passion  empathy " does the speaker care what they are saying" empowering  compassion.
Logos - " Does the speakers argument make sense" varbal.               Explain & persuade.                                                Expository

Discipline

This is my final presentation.

Why i'm i so tired ? Is it mentally Tired or I'm I really tired ?

I'm sitting here thinking about what to post about and as I'm sitting here bored, i'm yawning. I am tired yes, but i'm I really tired or is it mental? so I look it up and I find out that being tired can be mental but the cause of being tired can also be a result of health issues: depression, heart disease, chronic illness, and autoimmune disease can all lead to insomnia or trouble sleeping. all of the theses cause you to have trouble sleeping. but me I sleep well or I have a good enough nap to were I wake up and I don't feel tired.if your mentally tired you will know because it becomes harder to stay focuses on a task, make health decisions and remind calm.